Draft 1 advert

This is my first draft, it has been said that my advert has too many blank spaces. I will alter this as I feel as though my advert is rather unbalanced. I think that the 'out now' section should be placed central as opposed to on the Left. I also think that it would be much better if the Album name is at eye level as opposed to at the top. This would make it much easier to read and draw more attention to the artists name. This therefore makes it much better for the audience to understand and see what the album is about.
I have had some feedback throughout the stage of my advert design.
'I love the idea but I think it looks unbalanced with the typography at the left side'
'I love it, I think it looks really quirky'
'I think that the layout needs to be altered but you don't need to change the imagery or fonts, just muddle it around a bit'